Zhejiang college entrance examination full score essay cited hot discussion: some people say that it is old and obscure, some people say that it is uncoordinated
The Paper, reporter Zhu Xuan, intern Yang Luyi
"Modern society takes Heidegger's phrase'all practical traditions have been disintegrated' as its target. Expectations that originated in family and social traditions are losing their reference. But in the face of the seemingly boundless future sky, I want to follow Karl The life of Vino "The Baron in the Tree" is better than a premature vibrating..."
The above sentence comes from the first paragraph of an essay entitled "Living on a Tree" in Zhejiang Province's 2020 College Entrance Examination with full score. Professors from the Zhejiang Provincial College Entrance Examination Composition Scoring Group commented on the article, saying that “the old and obscure coexist, and the thinking is deep and stable.”
According to the WeChat public account "Teaching Monthly" of Zhejiang Teaching Monthly News Agency, the first scoring teacher only gave 39 points for this composition, but the latter two teachers gave high points of 55 points, and the composition review team finally gave a full score. . This demonstrates the rigorous and scientific scoring of the college entrance examination composition. According to CNKI, Zhejiang Teaching Monthly is an educational newspaper and periodicals that is directed and sponsored by Zhejiang University of Foreign Languages for teachers and students in elementary and middle schools and directly serves basic education.
Professor Chen Jianxin, the leader of the Zhejiang College Entrance Examination Composition Review Group, commented, “Every sentence of it revolves around the gap and dislocation between personal life ideals and family society expectations. The article is logically rigorous from beginning to end, and reasoned. There is no unnecessary nonsense, and all the citations are not meant to fill the surface or fill in the number of words." But comment experts also pointed out that writing this requires candidates to read a lot of books, and the textual expression is so academic, which is not what ordinary high school students can do. "Of course, I don't want students to imitate the obscurity."
The composition aroused heated discussion.
Zhu Xuedong, a senior media person who graduated from the Department of Philosophy of Renmin University of China, commented on Weibo, "What is the composition test for the college entrance examination? I think it is nothing more than the theme, the logical interpretation of the theme, the ability to make sentences and so on. This full score composition is in These three aspects are qualified, whether it is the theme, logic or literal expression." Zhu Xuedong said, "It is not that everyone has to learn this way, but it is rare and should be encouraged. In this sense, give full marks to me. No objection."
On August 3, writer Ma Boyong commented on Weibo that the aforementioned articles are difficult to simply evaluate with "full score composition" or "bad composition". He said that the article used a lot of uncommon words, uncommon allusions and academic sentences such as charm and charm, the division of the practice field, and the ideal expectation paradigm. "It is surprising that these uncommon words, uncommon allusions and uncommon expressions are used in the right place."
But Ma Boyong believes that the problem is that this is not necessary. The meaning to be expressed in the composition can be organized in more plain and simple words and sentences, and the information will not be lost at all. To sum it up in four words: the word is not coordinated. He believes that the real problem lies with the marking teacher. The author has reading, knowledge, and expressive skills. There is no problem with tactical choices. The future must be promising. Just strategically, don't think that writing this way is a good way out.
In response to the aforementioned composition, Xiong Bingqi, vice chairman of the 21st Century Education Research Institute, told The Paper that a good composition should be personalized and not uniform. You cannot use one standard to require all compositions. The high score for this article is mainly due to its ideological and rigorous logic, but there are indeed relatively obscure issues. "In recent years, the college entrance examination composition emphasizes speculation, and it is difficult for ordinary students to have in-depth speculation."
Xiong Bingqi also said that evaluating composition is a professional matter in the field of education, and not all netizens have such a professional level. Therefore, it still depends on the evaluation of professional teachers. Every year, netizens complain about the composition of the college entrance examination, but many complaints are not professional.
Attached: Zhejiang Volume 2020 Composition Topics
Everyone has their own coordinates in life, as well as good expectations for the future.
Families may have different expectations of us, and society may also give us different roles.
In the constantly changing real life, gaps or dislocations between individuals and families and society will inevitably occur.
How do you experience and think about this? Write an article and talk about your views.
【Note】①The angle is optional, the intention is self-determined, and the topic is self-made. ②Clarify the style and not write poetry. ③Not less than 800 words. ④ No plagiarism or copying is allowed.